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I would like to know, if for the above model essay if they ask for give your opinion what should should be modified in order to reuse the above essay.

IELTS essay questions for the topic of communication and personality.

Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.

Why do you think that is the case?

Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet, to communicate.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.

To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Reported 2017, Academic Test)

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It will affect your score for Coherence and Cohesion which is 25% of your marks and includes the logical order of information and ideas. It is not logical to change the order.

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= i have written all the advantages y people prefer internet and includes 4 examples and some disadvantages in 2nd body paragraph.. Let me know the correct answer please. M very upset…. (correct if any mistake is in the topic line)

Hi, I'm Liz. Welcome to my IELTS tips, model answers and practice

Hi Liz. What are the advantages and disadvantages? and Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? these 2 questions are same right? responses to these 2 questions are almost same paragraphical order?

What other characteristics do companies look for in a manager?

People now use more and more internet to do tasks (eg. Shopping, paying bills, buy movie tickets) rather then in person.
Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

-More railroads to move supplies, men and equipment.

After you summarise the main points, you have the choice of adding a final comment to your conclusion which can be a prediction or suggestions (depending on the type of essay question you have). To learn more see my advanced lessons:
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Liz

What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision?

-Trading Relationships with Europe.

You express your opinion – which are more important? If you think the ads are more important than the disadvs, then you explain this in your essay.

-Long coastline made blockade difficult.

-They were convinced they were right.

Hi Liz , in this topic , you did not include any examples .is this ok ?
i am sorry but i try to understand and define a certain forum to follow .
thanks